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Thread Title: Lest we forget
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I think this would work without the last line in each stanza. As it is it is working too hard to sustain the betting image. I have a fondness for this subject and think this delivers as below - and even the title could survive.The clinging mudof Ypresplayed for keeps.Lest we forget.The grumbling gunsof Francemet each advance.Lest we forget.In crawling shroudsof gas,throat-torn gasps.Lest we forget.A blown-off legor arm,wheres the harm?Lest we forget.Yet promisesof peace,never cease.The odds on bet?They will forget.
There are 3 things more important than the N.A.F.C to me ....Remembrance DayA.N.Z.A.C. DayAnd Family, and I guess that includes you lot.We are a very lucky country/generation.Lest We Forget